Queen Virgo went pale. She had read an awkward sentence about “a man running down the street chasing a cat, when unfortunately his scarf got caught on a tree branch.” WHOSE scarf got caught in the tree branch? From the sentence structure, it seems like it must’ve been the cat’s scarf. Since when do cats wear scarves? Queen Virgo shuddered.
Queen Virgo got out her red pen, the one with fresh ink. She crossed out the entire sentence, and wrote in its place: “A cat was being pursued by a man; unfortunately, his scarf got tangled in a tree branch and slowed him down.”
The red ink did not wash off the computer screen later.