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Saturday, May 18, 2013

961. This Is What Heaven Looks Like

 
I topple
underneath waves,
gulping Pacific foam, like honey. 
Surfers romance me with their ocean ballet. 
Dolphins compete for my attention.  I marvel at my luck,
my front row seat to
their dance. 
 

 
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Trifecta writing challenge/ 33 words/ the bold words used were from list of required

30 comments:

  1. I am on the magic countdown for my own ocean vacation. Removing myself from the summer heat of Dante's Hell, better known as Phoenix.

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    1. oh, I am jealous of you and your ocean, Tuna.

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  2. The ocean never seemed so nice. I could feel it!

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  3. I love the ocean too, and the surfers' dangerous ballet. Great descriptive piece!

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  4. That's a superb piece of writing capturing the moment

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  5. lovely . . . the Pacific is a bit cold where I live (Alaska), but I'm sure you mean the part of it near Hawaii's shores. Don't forget to come up for air. (else this could have a whole different ending) :)

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    1. yikes, did not intend it in a dark way at all.

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  6. Almost makes me feel like I'm on vacation! Thanks. Love the toppling under a wave.

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  7. I love watching surfers. They make it look so easy, I almost think I could try it. (I know better than to actually try, though!)

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    1. they do make it seem effortless, right?

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  8. Lovely description. I feel bad for the people who never see the poetry around them.

    http://completelycalifornia.blogspot.com/

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  9. I hate water but I love this. ♥

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  10. Beautiful imagery-could almost see the whole scene!

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  11. Foam like honey . i like that

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  12. I would take honey waves over briny ones any day.

    Thanks for linking up!

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    1. ha! thanks for keeping the contests going. =D

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